hello.music round seven — I Am the King of Sad Retorts

hello.musicHere is I am the King of Sad Retorts version three.


Okay…I finally penned some lyrics and tracked a really rough melody and harmony for this song last night. I think the song will be okay once I refine the words and make the melody clearer, not mumbled and not cracking. But the basic shell I think is there. I really wish I had a female singer to duet with this…but maybe I’m just defaulting into the Tweedy\Gibbard mode that I was trying to get away from on this song. Thoughts?

To hear past version of this song and\or discussion and lyrics go here.