hello.music — crushed

hello.music
Here’s a new song I’ve been working on. I was messing around the other night with some really low, raspy tunings. Listen first to the original scratch track (on nylon) and then the updated one (on steel) with some lyrics. I did fill in the progression a bit from the original, which I do like. Sorry for the sucky off key vocals- apparently I kind of forgot the original verse melody I had going. Any thoughts? How’s the chorus?

Version 1

[audio:https://secureservercdn.net/198.71.233.179/wvv.338.myftpupload.com/greg/music/crushed_1.mp3]

Version 2

[audio:https://secureservercdn.net/198.71.233.179/wvv.338.myftpupload.com/greg/music/crushed_2.mp3]

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  1. For the second version, did you change keys for this or just singing lower? I think we could harmonize both parts at the same time there, one high one low.

    Also did you change to a steel string here? Your strumming sounds great… really forceful and confident.

    This is going to be great. Let me know how I can help.

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